Friend prompt
Just when I came home the phone rang. It was my friend, she told me she was having problem's with her boyfriend. Then we started talking. One of the words that describe me as a good friend is a friendly friend.I could describe myself as a friendly friend is when my friends need something they know I am always there. When they need someone to trust on, they always come to me, because they know that I won't tell nobody. My friends could always trust on me because they know I won't tell nobody. It's are little secret. For me my friends are like my sisters. Even though they are not I see them like MY SISTERS. Then after hours of talking my friend told me "thanks for helping me on whatever I need."
6 comments:
Hi I like how you described how you are a friend and your hook really grabed my atention.I like how you finished your hook in your ending.
I think that your friend prompt is alright, but the main point is not in your piece
dear yoanna,
i like you promt i like how you started you prompt with a great stoy and ended it with how you story ended keep up tour good work
Dear Yoanna,
I really liked your hook.It really took my attention.I also liked your friend prompt, it really tells how you are a friendly friend.The part I really liked was when you said that your friends are like your sisters even though they really aren't but you take them as sisters.Well your prompt was really interesting!
Sincerely,Ruby
i liked your hook about the phone ringing and it was your friend but i would like to see you describe and tell how your friendly. what friendly things do you do that makes you friendly?
iHola!
Your friend prompt is good! The hook really caught my attention. Your details are OK but you need to be more specific. Other than that, it was good!!!:)
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